libby100wc#1

One day I was walking across the road when I heard a huge BANG! I walked over to the sound and my eyes nearly popped out of my skull two GIANT HANDS appeared out of the ground with a strange piece of rope ,I was amazed. Who could these hands belong to a giant, a God it could be anything but what is it? Suddenly the HUGE HANDS started to go grey and were turning into STONE!I ran home as fast as I could this was big news BIG, BIG news I would be famous I would be on tv it would be FANTASTIC!

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  1. Hi Libby, the famous giant hand finder! I really liked how this story flowed and the excitement generated by your use of short phrases and exclamations as well as the capital letters. This reminded me of Terry Pratchett’s character called Death who always spoke in capital letters. Anyway a really lovely bit of creative writing, well done.

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