damian100wc#1

Today I went  to the park with my mum and my friend to play and then we went to the shops buy something. When we were going to the shop and we saw some giant hands that were climbing onto the rope but what might happen after? Who knows. So we went to the shops and when we came back the hands moved up. Maybe there is an under ground town and those hands are coming out because they are lonely and they don’t have any one to play with. So then me and my friend stood next to the hands and my mum made us a picture and we went home.

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  1. Hi Damian,
    Well done for a good idea. I loved the idea of the hands being lonely in an alternate town and seeking out friendship. Next time, try to write a mixture of short and long sentences to add some excitement for the reader.
    Keep up the writing!
    Ciara
    Team 100, Ireland

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